Before i turned my choice paper in i re-read it two more times, had my mom, grandma, and a friend read it.
Before::
After that we went back to the apartment and got the directions to places to eat that my sister had prited off before she went to the hospital. We went and ate at KFC. None of us really liked the chickn, it was spicy and dry. We ate what we could then left. The rest of the night we got ocasional texts and calls from my mom with updates on what was going on at the hospital. My dad, sister, and I all slept in the baby's room. My mom slept at the hospital.
After::
After that we went back to the apartment and got the directions to places to eat that my sister had printed off before she went to the hospital. We went and ate at KFC. None of us really liked the chicken, it was spicy and dry. We ate what we could then left. The rest of the night we got occasional texts and calls from my mom with updates on what was going on at the hospital. My dad, sister, and I all slept in the baby's room. My mom slept at the hospital.
When i finished my choice paper i showed my mom and she found a few mistakes that i had made and helped me fi them. Then i showed my grandma and she found a few mistakes that my mom and i both missed. I used the spell check tool and checked again. I think this helped me write a better paper cause i had more than one set of eyes checking it.
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